The Sun Comes Out

This is written by a 12 year old student. Please comment kindly. I am the teacher. The sun comes out in the morning. The moon comes out at night. The roosters rise at dawn. The wolves wake at dusk. The roosted wake the farmers. The wolves hunt the roosters. The farmers hunt the wolves. The government hunts the farmers. The farmers rebel. The government is overthrown. The people rule the country. The people watch the country crumble. The government tries to rebuild. The government fails. The enemy swoops in like an eagle. The enemy takes over the country. The enemy, is Canada.