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The Sun and the Moon

Whilst the sun wasn’t looking the moon rose high She gathered the stars for the suns’ surprize But the sun had already moved away And she felt sorrow because it was his birthday When the sun rose early at the break of dawn The moon and the stars had long been gone He could hear them crying vaguely in the distance Don’t worry my darling we’ll meet together at eclipses’ Don’t think I don’t know of all your pain I’ll rise up behind you make you smile again And illuminate you and all of your friends Because I know of your beautiful party plans So the sun and the moon now meet at certain times And all of their children come together and shine Never will she ever weep again For the sun loves the moon and they’re the best of friends © Copyright KC.Leake 13th September 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/14/2015 2:19:00 PM
Really enjoyed this! The sun and the moon - what a great pair to write about. Very creative and so pleasing to read.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/14/2015 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Janet, I appreciate your comment. Best wishes Kevin
Date: 9/13/2015 12:43:00 PM
Charming write indeed. Loved how you called each eclipse a party... cute write, Kevin. hugs!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/13/2015 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Kim, Glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the read and comment, appreciated. Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 9/13/2015 12:23:00 PM
such a charming romantic write Kevin I really loved the imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/13/2015 2:00:00 PM
Thank you Jan' Glad you enjoyed it Best Wishes Kevin

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