The Sun

I wait for your warm embrace It pierces the harden shell were I dwell The brilliance of your beauty draws me in A vision of magnificence My eyes long to hold your gaze I wait with a heavy heart for your arrival Never disappointed I am Captured My Eyes My Skin My Soul At Peace Once More That You Are Here~

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Hannah Stockwell

Date: 6/12/2015 9:20:00 AM

This is such a good poem about the sun. Good job on being featured.

Skat A

Date: 6/12/2015 1:07:00 AM

Ninette, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/3/2014 12:24:00 PM

- Hey Nina, thanks for a lovely poem - Enjoy reading it :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/2/2014 3:41:00 PM

Oh what a lovely piece you made ,Nina... it brought joy in my heart. :) very well done!

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/1/2014 10:22:00 PM

This brings a smile to my face, knowing that the sun will shine on. Wonderful words. Write on!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/1/2014 12:00:00 PM

Absolutely beautifully penned - we all are so much brighter when the sun shines - it always lifts our spirits:-) Great write a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan x

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/1/2014 4:37:00 PM

Thank You! Today is a New Beginning for Me!! An Mine! xo

Funom Makama

Date: 12/1/2014 10:08:00 AM

I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....

Ninette Carey
Date: 12/1/2014 4:35:00 PM

Thank You!! xo for Your kind words!