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The Sum Total of Today's Joint Family Luck

THE SUM TOTAL OF TODAY'S JOINT FAMILY LUCK There are many members tied up with many relationships few are males and few are females old young all bear zips all having not alike ideologies sentiments and thoughts Few work earn more few less few live in droughts in the discussion of family matters few step first few show for no reason always false burst few maintain honesty few try to cheat few remain silent never emit heat few are gentle few are skittish few are cleaver most selfish few are social few aren't few engage in tort Joint Home's luck today's pluck cluck

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Ma Yaseen

Date: 9/24/2014 9:15:00 AM

the poem flows so smoothly, you have done it in a splendid way..... Rated 7

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/24/2014 9:50:00 AM

Thanks a lot my lovely friend for your lovely comment. Loved always, my poet friend,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2014 4:23:00 PM

hmm, the tort thing> I never heard of that before, the way you explained it!

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/2/2014 1:50:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for re-commenting on my poem. Loved always,bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/30/2014 5:14:00 PM

very interesting format you used. What does it mean to engage in tort!

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/30/2014 5:30:00 PM

When one does something and if other does the same thing then the former one shows that he has right to do that but next one has no right. Thanks my lovely friend for reading my poem and for your comment. Loved always,bl

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2014 2:24:00 PM

love the clever form you created and the rhyme - quite incredible! Hugs Jan xx