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The Suitcase

A blue-eyed man knocked on the door to my heart. I opened. But the ways of life got us crushed I realize I have to get unbroken. Pack up the suitcase, leave for other parts on to the unspoken.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:28:00 PM
SASHA, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 7/20/2010 1:15:00 AM
this compelled me,...lovely play of words Sasha...^_^ v
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Date: 7/9/2010 3:06:00 PM
Scares me a little , I have blue eyes too..... Nice write from the heart... the words grab you and make you listen.. always Michael
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:38:00 PM
I really like this write. It radiates sadness and something else I can't seem to put my finger on. Enjoyed very much.
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