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The Sucky Couch

My couch is oh so Comfy. It’s true I wouldn’t lie. And every time I sit there, I have trouble with my eyes. No matter who is with me, or what I’m watching on TV…. It tends to drift right by me as I work hard, my eyes to see. Unfortunately, they keep closing. No matter what I do. And I have to watch a movie repeatedly, to finally see it thru. I know I’m getting older. Of that I have no doubt. That couch sucks me into its comfort, tho it’s a prize I treasure all-out. So if you come to see me, expect the very worst… But know I’d love to visit, if only I could stay alert… My father came to visit at the age of 78… We got along to perfection, with all the naps we both take each night… I swear, I can fall asleep sitting up, or standing on my head. My husband lays a blanket upon me, each night as he goes to bed. Then finally I will wake up, about 2-3 AM… Then it’s off to bed to finish what I started before then… And then another nap at noon time, between writing poetry in a comfy chair… There’s times I lose my poetry to my little snores there… Then it’s back to working harder to try to write some more… But that couch is so addictive, I doubt I’ll ever see my friends again… And any where past 7 is really bad for me… But don’t forget to visit, anyway…if you’re in the vicinity. If you cannot wake me… just leave a note, you see… And I’ll be really tickled pink… to know you remembered me, it’s true… Even though I may not remember you… Written 1-18-2013: Love it because it's so true and was fun to write.

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Date: 9/29/2013 11:10:00 AM
Way to go, Carol. Nice job. luv, Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations !
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:25:00 PM
Great sleepy story told..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:48:00 PM
Carol, lovely win......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 11:13:00 AM
I love this , I have one of those couches ! Congratulations on a fine win !
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:09:00 AM
This one can't help but make me laugh....I suppose many of us have a sucky couch that swallows us whole!! Me too !!! Such a fun poem!!
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:03:00 AM
Congrads I bet your dreaming trolls. John
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Date: 9/28/2013 4:53:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:33:00 PM
Carol, a lovely poem, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:22:00 PM
what a cute write....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/18/2013 10:25:00 AM
This was so lighthearted and a joy to read... reminds me of something Jack Ellison would write. I don't think I could write, in such great detail as you, about a furniture piece, but wow this was so different... love the originality!
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Date: 1/21/2013 11:43:00 AM
Mine is a big comfy Lay-Z-Boy... same result! Hahaha got a big chuckle out of this one dear Carol! Heading for my big easy chair now... bye!
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:55:00 PM
Love this poem. I can fall asleep as easily as you seem to be able to do. My mother thinks that she and i have a slight case of narcolepsy. I any case love your poem.
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Date: 1/20/2013 8:27:00 AM
Carol I think we all have one of these...David
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Date: 1/19/2013 10:40:00 AM
Haha no Im not !:) Not related to sanya mirza either! Im from a half british family who went to britain but their half family stayed Indian
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Date: 1/19/2013 7:10:00 AM
Maybe you are missing vitamins, or it is the trolls that make you sleepy. - Well written my friend. - Have a great weekend, do not sleep it away. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2013 2:02:00 AM
Thank you for your comment !:) Please can you tell me how to reply back on my poems.
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Date: 1/18/2013 2:58:00 PM
At 83 I have your problem. I love sport, watch a lot of them about half way through, then I fall asleep. Any damn thing I watch has to be extremely good to keep me awake. In the army I was on shifts. I could go to sleep on a card table, no shift. Enjoyed, daver
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Date: 1/18/2013 10:46:00 AM
Ha ha you sound like my husband lol like it xx
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