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The Subtle Serpent

The subtle serpent’s not a tale, conceived by one who drank strong ale. Wise, with wings resplendent in flight, a perfect ploy in Satan’s fight. Its charm disarmed the woman Eve, as Satan’s sinful snare was weaved. Its pleasant words like poison darts, pierced and polluted her pure heart. The subtle serpent still beguiles with winsome words and well-spun wiles. He infiltrates his victims’ minds with thoughts that titillate and blind. Throw out restraint and have your fill of whatever would chill and thrill. After a while the stuff you crave, possess and make of you a slave. Live for you and yourself alone, put number one upon the throne. Then when years of life have flown you end up in a zombie zone. Burn your candle at both ends, run wild, chase after all the trends. Make it your goal to earn and spend, and upon your wealth to depend. The wily foe is still disguised, his stratagem he’s not revised. He always works behind the scenes employing surreptitious means. Beware of the subtle serpent friend, his way leads to a deadly end. He wants to rob you of God’s gift and between you two create a rift.

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Date: 4/4/2022 11:05:00 PM
Very well thought out lines with distinct meanings, and excellent rhyme, David Richmond!...ab
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David Richmond
Date: 4/8/2022 7:51:00 AM
Thank you Anselmo for your kind complimentary comment. This was a challenging write for me, but I'm glad you like it. I would appreciate it greatly if you can share this poem with people in your circle so that the message can be disseminated far and wide.

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