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The Student Show

Energized, even as my excitement mounted I looked calm Especially, since the millionaire minds and poets clapped At a few amateurs, their students--and me Proud like a child presenting to her parents, I Kept my good behavior until the end, when I blinked to my surprise, a few tears threatening An outright cry and whimpers, that Among my peers I could not stand, Or even in front of those I admire-- My piece wasn't shown after all, My loss was not felt at all.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/5/2016 1:01:00 PM
Misheel, enjoyed reading your poem. Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 6/26/2010 10:39:00 AM
I like the expressions regarding the Student Show. It's very expressive. I like these lines, "Energized, even as my excitement mounted I looked calm, especially, since the millionaire minds and poets clapped." Always show confidence and go forth without a worry in mind. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/25/2010 10:58:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Misheel. Love, Carol
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