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The Struggle

Hanging onto a limb In the eye of a storm Can't see Can't think How much longer Can I hold on My grip is weak Trying to hold tight Can't see Can't think About to let go It's too strong to fight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/3/2015 7:48:00 AM
Beautiful, so many people go through the same thing. But you hold on, you refuse to let go, you get this strength, from where you don't know. Then you wonder why? Just look to the sky.
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 6/29/2015 10:14:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your encouragement.

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