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The Struggle

as night falls and dark crawls up to form an abyss where every hand turns into a fist and a small fight turns into a struggle for life to do what is right or wait out for morning light a cry in the night sends a shiver of fright through out the town but they pretend there was never a sound

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/3/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Amber. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 2:39:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 5/4/2010 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on this great poem being featured this week..Sara
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
People are just as guilty when they turn their heads and look the other way. Congrats on the feature. Vince
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Date: 5/3/2010 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Amber on your worthy poem feature this week. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/3/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 5/3/2010 9:03:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/3/2010 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup. May you have many more features Amber. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/17/2009 5:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amber. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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