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The Strong One

She laughs when she's about to cry She does what she has to, no matter the task. To the sick baby she coos. She doesn't get much pay but thanks God it's enough to pay the bills She's the one who's tough. Tell me who the stong one is She never lets anyone down She has a heart that only gives I'm the greedy one in my town.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 2:27:00 PM
Strong will in this lovely rhyme Brooke >> James
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Date: 2/25/2010 1:17:00 PM
this is a really wonderful right i could think about it in many different ways, i loved it. Jo
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Date: 2/20/2010 9:34:00 PM
That is a testament to the strength and resolve of your soul Ms. Brooke please hold on for through preserverence you give those around you a greater grasp on hope for a brighter future, I enjoyed reading this and will continue to do so. P.S. Your nascent gift will take you as far as you allow it smile for you have given one to a stranger far away. =) Sang
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Date: 2/15/2010 8:19:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/15/2010 7:12:00 PM
funny--sounds like most moms
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Date: 2/15/2010 12:02:00 PM
I liked that, thnks
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