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The Street Dog

The street dog I saw a dog on the street which didn’t appear very neat it looked like an abandoned pet whose owner was in great debt I saw a dog on the street which was very scared but sweet Bad boys threw stones at it but it only barked and never bit I saw a dog on the street which could do well with a treat but it was very lonely and sad which made me feel very bad I saw a dog on the street which had a scruffy coat and sore feet because it had to run a lot and didn’t have a hiding spot I saw a dog on the street which was sick from the dust and heat once it guarded its master’s house but now its life is in chaos There are many dogs like that on the street who could all do well with a treat but people hardly care for them this is something we should condemn Benedict John(8 years)

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Date: 3/8/2012 6:31:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Benedict. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2012 10:38:00 AM
Thanks mam . Benedict is my 8 year old son who has written this poem. Benedict is a gifted child who writes good poems and stories. In India you find many dogs on the street and all his feelings are expressed through his poem. Thanks for liking the poem. regards Elizabeth Benedict's mom

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