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The Stranger Inside Me

There's a stranger that lives deep inside of me Who always shows up most unexpectedly Usually with no one else around to see Or demand me to be different than I want to be This stranger hides far away from sight To avoid causing yet another fight Of its own opinion it has no right Maybe I'll meet this stranger here tonight I'll have candles and a bubble bath Close the door to avoid confronting the wrath Invite it in, go somewhere far away Dream of my life, of another day A bang on the door, it's clear to me It's time to go back to reality The stranger goes back inside where you can't see Waiting to appear again at its next opportunity ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/2/2013 6:42:00 PM
This is a powerful and brilliant write. The reader can relate to what is being told in these words. Everyone has a secret identity and hides behind a mask sometimes. nice job
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:46:00 PM
Dear Donna,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Great Monorhyme except for verse 3 If YOU had a Lipse as I did when I was younger than YOU could have used ath to rhyme with bath,but I can not thinkof any other words that rhyme with wrath. Superb Quill. I must Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my POEM "I LOVE YOU LENORE" Did YOU see it Embedded in the POEM. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...HG - SOUP MAIL shortly as I did not Pre-Write it
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/16/2013 6:30:00 AM
Thanks Harry, your comments are so uplifting, after you..pointed them out! I found your embedded code...very clever.....Donna
Date: 3/28/2013 8:40:00 PM
Donna; I went back to read one of your old poems. It's a beauty. I guess, we all have a stranger inside of us, that no one else can see. maybe one day we can set tjhat stranger free. have a happy Easter. lucilla
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/16/2013 6:33:00 AM
Hi Lucilla...yes...everyone does I think...thanks for stopping...
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Donna Jones
Date: 4/16/2013 6:28:00 AM
Thanks Harry your comments are so uplifting..after you pointed them out!!!! I found your embedded code...very clever!!!!!
Date: 2/7/2013 4:17:00 PM
The mirror of lies shows the disguise that can not be denied. The secret soul behind the mask where only it has cried. An answer waits there to be found. Next time when it comes back around. Love these kind of poems Donna. Peace. :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/7/2013 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Robert ...I shall when it comes round again....occasionally....
Date: 2/1/2013 8:26:00 AM
This is an exceptionally well expressed poem, Donna, one telling a charming story that many of us have experienced ourselves at one time or another in our lives. Carl.
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/2/2013 1:41:00 PM
Thanks for taking time to write. I appreciate it. Yes I guess we all do. Blessings...
Date: 1/30/2013 8:14:00 PM
Wow such a fantastic write, a glorious write indeed my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing and incredible poem this evening Donna! What a powerful and insightful piece you have written about! Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/30/2013 10:26:00 PM
You are always so kind Russell..insightful? Maybe...I'll get brave and really give ya some insight into my world later but life is mostly good... I'm a tough gal.

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