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The Story of the Door

Part One- Reality The door is closing I’m loath to close it And yet….and yet I feel….I must Close it gently Close is surely Close it….SLOWLY Oh, so very slowly Hoping against hope Part Two- Fantasy How I long to fling it open And dash outside Grab your retreating frame And pull you inside Eager to show you The wonders I’ve prepared The love decorations I’ve hung Perhaps if you could see With your own eyes My little and cozy heart The warm fire that continually burns The bed that I’ve prepared and perfumed The food…delicacies for your tongue Treats bursting with flavors You’ve never tasted before Sweet dainty desserts for when The night has turned to day And we arise hungry Searching for what will sustain us For our next expenditure Of passion tinged energy From which we never tire Perhaps then You'd come inside My heart kingdom Here, you reign In this kingdom All is under your command My soul and body Yours to do with as you wish Without asking Without demanding For I belong to you And I know you well Aware of what will please When to appease When to placate And when to tease… I serve you with tender hand Longing to satisfy you So you will never want to leave To make you dream contented dreams As you sleep soundly On the soft silken pillows Of my body And awake to dream again For life is but “A Dream within a Dream” Part 3- Back to Reality No, your figure continues to retreat My voice does not reach you My tears fall unnoticed This door of my heart Must close forever I will bolt it too For I cannot bear the thought Of letting another in Only you Only you… I sigh behind the door Looking at the bed That will not hear My moans and cries of ecstasy Nor your contended sighs A bed that will never hold Our entwined bodies Tossing and turning Finely tuned to the rhythm of delight A bed that will never feel Hands that clutch at its silken sheets Desperate to hold on…a little longer In that pulsating world of blinding light Part 4- The Final Act I lean with all my strength against the door To close it “forevermore” And yet… There is resistance It will not close Frustrated, with tears spilling down Threatening to turn into a deluge I fling the door open Only to look at a massive chest My eyes travel up to your face And those beautiful eyes My source of delight Your hand reaches out And wipes away tears My breath catches in my throat As I hear your mellow voice speak “Won’t you invite me in?” Part 5- Yes, the happy ever after! Eileen Manassian Ghali

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/30/2017 8:14:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this one again. Also it was quite a lively conversation.
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Date: 8/22/2013 4:16:00 PM
Hooked. Tears. Love.
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Date: 8/20/2013 5:41:00 PM
Another emotionally charged poem from you my little Desert Orchid. Can't imagine what brought him back though, maybe he was hungry lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/20/2013 5:36:00 PM
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Date: 8/20/2013 1:55:00 PM
Boy...I don't always read others comments..never have time...I thought the jist was you were offering someone all the happiness they could STAND if only invited...guess I'm simple minded....I liked it sweetie...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/20/2013 2:03:00 PM
HEY, MD...thanks for stopping by, my dear! Yes, that is the message of the poem! :) All is well! No worries! Thanks for your support and love as always! Hugs!
Date: 8/19/2013 8:55:00 PM
My apologies for talking straight from the heart. I didn't mean to offend. It makes me angry when people think they have to stick it together. One suffers, and the other one lives on your expense. Your struggles were my personal struggles, prior to divorce. Personally, I do not regret for closing the door. I was just trying to be of a help. You can delete my posts. My apologies again Eric
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/20/2013 6:27:00 PM
Hello Eric please forgive my reaction as well. You sound like a thoughtful and considerate person. I am glad you took time to explain. I guess all og us have our own crosses to bear. All part of being human I guess. Please let me know when you post I would like to read your work.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 10:03:00 PM
After my initial reaction, I had a feeling that perhaps your comment was sincere...Please, again, forgive me if my response was strong. I'm sorry you had to go through such difficult times, Eric. Sometimes it is easier to throw in the towel. I've at times told hubby, in moments of frustration, "I"m going to leave you!" His reaction? "You can't live without me!" That is how sure he is that despite all the problems, ...I love him. I'm no angel, so how can I expect him to be. Thanks ever SO much for the explanation, Eric. No...the comments stand. Especially this one. Do take care! :)
Date: 8/19/2013 9:14:00 AM
Love your response to Mr. Linden... kudos! Big chuckles and a bunch of love my dear SWEET Betty Boop! LOL
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:04:00 PM
:( I'm not so proud of myself, Kenny. Perhaps he meant well.....I hope he isn't upset. Anyway...thanks for passing by....Yea, Betty BOOP. I owe Craig Cornish for that title that stuck after he saw an avatar of me puckering my lips!! ;) HUGS!!!!
Date: 8/19/2013 8:38:00 AM
I am sad, it was really good, I would put it back. Have a great day Eileen.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:06:00 PM
I just got back from a lovely evening out with friends at this enchanting restaurant up in the hills. I laughed so much....the music, the food, the dreamy atmosphere...A night to remember. About bed time here....hope you are having a great day!
Date: 8/19/2013 5:38:00 AM
Wonderful !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Enjoyed and Loved it !! :)))))))))) . ...................Saanvi
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Saanvi! :)
Date: 8/19/2013 3:16:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:07:00 PM
Ravi, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Much appreciated!
Date: 8/19/2013 12:10:00 AM
The best thing about this writing, it's just a story. A very well written one. Loads of vulnerability, melancholy, & honesty. Kind of what poetry should be about, no matter the topic at hand (sadness, happiness, etc). Don't stop, Eileen. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:09:00 PM
My Pappy always says, "I joke about serious things and tell serious things in jokes." Ah....remember...I'm not a night person...I think it went something like that meaning....there is truth in every little joke! ;) Explode with creativity? YES!!! Silly me, thinking that was Tweety! I'm SOOOO embarrassed!
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Poet Tacito
Date: 8/19/2013 7:48:00 AM
Everyone's head would explode if they had my way of thinking. =D (half jokes)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 12:31:00 AM
Drake......thank you for that. I wish everyone had your way of thinking...I wish....Hugs
Date: 8/18/2013 9:28:00 PM
Your poems evolve around your unhappy marriage, and an unloving mother in law. it is time to close that door forever. Time to move on.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:18:00 PM
So much for an explanation. I guess you haven't read some of my poems about him....Look up the Sound of His Breathing. It won in the sound contest by Frank H. That is how I feel about my husband.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/19/2013 2:15:00 PM
Richard, thank you. I hope that I didn't overreact. Perhaps Eric meant well. :( I'm a hot blooded one! Eric, if you meant this in sincerity, forgive me...I just found it a bit too intrusive. Some doors are meant to be closed....but not this one! :) I have a beautiful daughter from this marriage, and I've known my hubby since we were 12. We've stuck it out for 20 years...No marriage is perfect...I'm not the perfect wife...Could things be better? Yes...Any married person would say that. Oh well....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/19/2013 9:13:00 AM
It's amazing how easy it is to arrive at assumptions without knowing a person. I think Eric is overly familiar with his comment. If everything we write is taken literally we would all be on 7th marriages, and have lived at least 12 lives. I like your response.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 11:13:00 PM
However, I am amazed that you find it so easy to share your take on my life. It was definitely unsolicited and you have no work posted where I can have a peek into your life and pass my valued opinion on yours. OH..wait a minute! I wouldn't do that!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 11:09:00 PM
What an interesting observation! Hmmmmmmmm.......All I can say to that.
Date: 8/18/2013 8:06:00 PM
Oh this is really amazing..loved it
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 11:14:00 PM
Thank you, Shah Jehan. What an interesting and fascinating name....Conjures up the story of Taj Mahal in my mind all over again. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 8/18/2013 7:00:00 PM
Two totems for my favorites in one day. Fantastic!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 11:16:00 PM
HA HA! I was trying to get the totem reference here....Totem poles of what? So, it was the darn spellchecker was it? :) Well, my dear, only one...only one! I pulled the other one so as not to possibly offend others....Thanks for stopping by, Richard. I need encouragement.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/18/2013 7:01:00 PM
Darn that spell corrector, I meant two poems *lol*
Date: 8/18/2013 6:13:00 PM
Wow, a poem of such passion and longing. A lovely write this is
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 8/18/2013 11:17:00 PM
Thanks Poetic Justice...It is lovely to take sometimes a germ of truth and embellish it. Thanks for visiting....you're always welcome!

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