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The Story of Love

The story of love The story of love is woven with silken threads on a cloud in heaven where no one sees Love brings happiness yes but we all forget the pain the sorrows the sadness the strain It is woven to trap us with beauty and richness but behind it all is fear and sadness We all fall in love but do we all obtain it? no, we've lost it Now we are lonely this is how it is a wondrous mystery.

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Date: 1/13/2009 8:12:00 PM
its really soooooo beautiful and sweet and thanx for ur sweet comments
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Date: 1/9/2009 12:13:00 PM
Guess I just keep writing poetry until it brightens my day. Love this piece and really love how the words just flow. Enjoyed readind it and have a great day.
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Date: 1/9/2009 9:44:00 AM
Maryam, this a beautiful and heart felt piece. It is sad how love can tear us apart. Young or old or in between. No one is safe. But hopefully, it makes your heart grow and the next time (and especially when you're young, there usually a next time) we learn more about ourselves and what we want. It just takes time to heal. No one escapes the scars, though. Awesome write! Love and a BIG HUG, Robin
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Date: 1/9/2009 8:15:00 AM
OMG wow.. I really love it
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