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The Storm

As the sky grew grey People in dismay But the flowers screaming hooray hooray Thunder grew violent And the people went silent Finally some peace and quiet For I am dreary And the sky eerie The people are growing more and more weary Clouds violently crying Happiness slowly dying People not wanting to be goodbying Rain like tears Thunder was your worst fear People screaming "the end is near the end is near" Thrashing Slashing Crashing That was the end of all human life ever lasting

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/12/2018 11:35:00 AM
vivid IMAGARY AND ACTION PACKED. MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN, KATY.
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Date: 1/10/2018 1:16:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Katy.
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Date: 1/10/2018 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely rhyming, personification Katy!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/10/2018 5:40:00 AM
Wonderful imagery and an edgy realism that I love ... congrats on your win, Katy! Blessings! :-) <3
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Date: 12/20/2017 3:17:00 PM
Great personification and great imagery..
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