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The Storm

Thunder Rolls, my soul echoes its sentiment. My Spirit is dark and gloomy like the sky. A memory strikes, an illuminating moment. My heart fissures painfully, I close my eyes against the agony, but the vision is vivid. I see lightning flash behind my eyes The rain begins to pour...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/23/2011 10:15:00 PM
wonderful imagery, loved it
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:04:00 PM
Nice piece of Romantic poetry well done!
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Date: 2/24/2010 12:28:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all...as this delight tonight.. nice free verse style ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:02:00 AM
Good imagery... Excellent.....:JP}
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Date: 2/24/2010 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Carol, I'll keep that in mind. I've been looking for a place to post, I'm liking this site so far. Susan, thank you, it was a vivid feeling.
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Date: 2/24/2010 3:54:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danielle. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/23/2010 10:59:00 PM
So vivid as you say
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