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The Stinging Kind

Jellyfish is the stinging kind, it is found in droves on our crowded beaches... any little sting can drive anyone wild. Yes, they are spineless, mordant and gelitous... being closed watched by large gulls with a hungry palate, but are chased away by dogs so ferocious; I'm wondering how they will look and taste on my plate! And still curious kids scoop them with plastic sand-shovels and try to save them by dropping them in water-filled buckets, running with excitement...ignoring the screams of their moms, and they yell, " Put them down, they will sting you more than once!" O jellyfishes, don't be vicious...we love you like shell-fish, if you could talk, your bizarre conduct won't be misunderstood by many! Is the water so polluted and infested with sharks that you flee from the sea, or are the fishermen so angry for wasted time on a worthless catch?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/19/2010 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:17:00 AM
Many congratulations Andrew on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:00:00 PM
Congraultations on your win, Andrew! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:40:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this wonderful depiction of this sea creature .. enormous write my friend.. with luv.. enjoy ...
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:24:00 PM
I wish that they weren't vicious! Good Luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/11/2010 10:35:00 AM
Great poem, Andrew. Especially like the line: "O jellyfishes, don't be vicious...we love you like shell-fish." In 10 years of deep sea fishing, I have never caught a jellyfish, Andrew. Perhaps the hooks just cut through them? Your Soup Mails aren't coming through. Getting "server errors." Tell Soup Admin and they can correct this. It's happened before. You sure made my day today! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:11:00 AM
wow,, nice one on jelly fishes lol,, enjoyed this one..P.D.
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