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The Steaming Train

A train steamed away tonight Taking you away from me I arrive at the station too late To find you gone with the wind's tale With your forgotten scarf in my hand I tried to fly to your new land

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/16/2009 7:27:00 AM
wonderful imagery - I like the significance of the scarf in your hand - all that you have left of a departed friend/loved one..
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Date: 12/25/2008 5:47:00 AM
sounds like a lost love one, any way or you missed the train huh. i love the end and how it sums every thing up, beatifully written and seems like it should be longer.
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Date: 12/17/2008 8:20:00 AM
I just love this write. It is magical..the last line is terrific. Great job!
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