The Steam Train

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And in my dream- I am on a train curving through the wilderness, steam billows into the sky from the black engine, and the train is rocking back and forth . . . It is so soothing- until I realize I am alone and have no control to get off, to stop the train and I have no destination! Oh, we must always have a destination- we cannot just go charging into the unknown. I am just hurtling forward, and this dream has become a nightmare . . . ________________________ April 24, 2016 Poetry/Verse/The Steam Train Copyright Protected, ID 16-855-216-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Contest 245, sponsor, Brian Strand Fifth Place

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Deborah Burch

Date: 12/6/2016 8:56:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Brian's contest!!! Well Done! Big Hugggs. Cap'n Deb

Len Gasun

Date: 12/4/2016 11:39:00 PM

We must have a specific destination in our life; otherwise, we'll be derailed. Great metaphor and excellent poem my dear friend, Constance. A 7+ and fave. Have a great new week! Good luck always! Hugs! love, Galeo

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2016 2:18:00 PM

Galeo, I always say I live for the day, but still we must have some idea where we are going, thanks for the 7 and the fave, appreciate ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/4/2016 7:05:00 PM

there is a misspelling. "I always think"--at least I hope so. Your poetry is elegant, true, beautiful and a gift to me. So, this is part of your destination and purpose. Thank-you so much for what you have shared.

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2016 2:22:00 PM

Duke, thanks for the compliments, I appreciate your forever support so much ~

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/4/2016 7:03:00 PM

Constance, this is a very interesting metaphor. I always thing of being in fog and hoping that it will lift, but this is has more of an intense feeling of urgency. I am hopeful you can go with the flow. Sometimes we do not have control over where we are going or cannot deal with it and are lost. That is tough to live with for a long time. Every day is an opportunity to do something for another person or something for this world. I know you have it in your heart--your poetry is a gift.

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2016 2:21:00 PM

Duke, yes living with no destination is like living in a fog also, we must have a purpose, yes giving of myself to others and to the world makes me so good inside ~