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A bible rests upon the desk, the spine is worn, brown hide Bearing lists of names of noble men, and dates within a clan Contained between two pages, hides a letter from a man Designed to be for one, alone, declaring love that died Etched with swirls, in ink, a poem, a link to words of love Foretelling someone's future, that could never bloom in full Garnished words of lover's gold, a story, never told Held in arms of fate that knew this love could never grow Interred, nearby a grave , a girl, as ancient stories go Just as love, the blossom died, before it could unfold Kept confined, quite ill in bed with a what had seemed a cold Lily Rose would die and chance of love would die as well Many eyes have seen this yellowed letter that I hold Never meant for eyes besides the gentle Lily Rose Odd that it comes by light of day, to me their story told Passed down to me, the ages waned, a place it shouldn't be Questions we will seek today, are tossed against the wind Rising once again, as the brittle page is turned Some stars are burned, and die too young, and not for us to own Tales of love have flown too far, to shine among the stars Underneath the light that shines into my lonely room Voices in the dark of night, are voices of the moon Whispered words of love unveiled, had fate been not so cruel Xanadu holds captive all the secrets and the clues Yesterday has come and gone, the stars will say goodbye Zealous love has come and gone, but love can never die ___________________________________________________ 7/8/15 For Contest sponsored by Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/24/2015 3:45:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. **SKAT**
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Date: 7/24/2015 11:54:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery and words woven throughout your poem, Connie! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 7/24/2015 5:38:00 AM
very well written apart from spelling / or wrong use of tense in your K line change lie to either lies or laid Carrie for a better flow congrats on placing hugs
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Date: 7/24/2015 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, yes.......I see my error in grammar, which somehow I overlooked while editing. You have a good eye! Thank you for the help, and for the placement !!
Date: 7/24/2015 12:28:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie!
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:55:00 PM
This ABC poem is awesome !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:41:00 PM
the imagery is wonderful and the story flows so beautifully Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/12/2015 12:07:00 AM
I love that last part. So romantic the last two lines. And the buildup to it with the tragic story. You will surely garner a top spot with this one, Carrie.
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Date: 7/10/2015 4:15:00 PM
Love is a song and thus unaffected by time which can only change the words but fails to alter the tune that remains in harmony with both heart and soul. Emile.
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Date: 7/9/2015 1:13:00 PM
and the story you have woven here, also made me think, on whether this is a true account? Yet again, you write with heart and grace-- I sure hope this gets top spot! This is such a fascinating tale, written with such ease and fluidity, I really enjoyed this. And since I am on "star" mode-- can't help but hear "Lost Stars" playing in my head-- are you familiar with that song? Keira Knightly sang it, and Adam Levine has a version of it, too. Loved hearing from you, miss you dear Carrie! Thank you!
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Date: 7/9/2015 1:09:00 PM
The title alone is riveting for me, having read somewhere that some stars (or is it all?) that we see, have already died, but since they're so far away, their light reaches us long after they have died. Sorry if I strayed from your wonderful poem... it was such a delight to hear from you Carrie! I have been meaning to email you, and I will one of these days! You had me double-checking the first letters here, since this just flowed so well for me-- the thoughts, everything ..cont'd
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Date: 7/9/2015 2:18:00 AM
Oh Carrie, this is most beautiful. I didnt realize it was an abecedarian until almost the end. That is how smooth your poem flowed. What a touching love story that will sky rocket all the way to the top I predict! 7 the picture truly adds to the class of your poem too.
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:57:00 PM
WELL! You just went out of your way to be GREAT! HERE'S AND CHEERS TO YA!
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