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The Stars In Your Eyes

S tars like pinpricks in the sky T iny beads of light shining so high A rranged in a way just so I ntricately set, this we know R emnant of a great explosion W ild arrangements, was it really implosion? A rrayed in what we see as confusion Y et all placed just so without exclusion T hought cannot take us there O mniscient power our thoughts ensnare T he stairs to the stars we can only seek H allelujah, hear the cries from the meek E luding our striving to catch them our chances weak S tars that twinkle we cannot reach T he barriers are there we cannot breach A s we cannot reach stars in the skies R each I can the stars in your eyes S tars that are mine I beseech Written by: Mandy Tams 20/02/2012

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Date: 1/6/2015 11:20:00 AM
back again in your oldies, they just get better all the time,Mandy,,
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Date: 10/21/2012 8:49:00 AM
lovely and a very well construched poem, still poems down here on your list i am finding....good i hope there are more...
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Date: 2/28/2012 5:06:00 PM
Congrats on the win Mandy..)
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest Mandy. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 6:44:00 AM
I would have placed it higher Mandy.Very good Acrostic.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:14:00 PM
Congrats Mandy on sweet success for this incredible entry luv.. thankxx for supporting too..luv..
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Date: 2/21/2012 12:24:00 AM
Mandy, you made all the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely here.
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Date: 2/20/2012 7:29:00 PM
good luck in the contest :)
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2012 12:04:00 AM
Thank you Virginia xx
Date: 2/20/2012 5:00:00 PM
oh, that is such a sweet ending the way you did the final stanza. Stars in the loved one's eyes , the ones you can reach. VERY lovely
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2012 12:05:00 AM
Thank you sweetie xx
Date: 2/20/2012 1:54:00 PM
Nice work!!! You have me waiting for dark and a clear sky. Hugs Michael
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2012 12:06:00 AM
Nothing more beautiful. Thanks Micheal xx
Date: 2/20/2012 1:46:00 PM
This is very beautiful Mandy...best of luck to you~~love,Deb
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/21/2012 12:06:00 AM
Thanks Deb xx
Date: 2/20/2012 12:31:00 PM
well written poem, your verses are so captivating and I love the verses reach I can the stars in your eyes, stars that are mine I beseech.
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 1:09:00 PM
Aw thanks Shirley and for taking time to read and comment much appreciated xx
Date: 2/20/2012 11:11:00 AM
An amazing Acrostic, Mandy. I am enchanted. The concluding lines have touched my heart most. -Mohammad
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Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 2/20/2012 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Mohammad I appreciate your taking time to read and comment

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