The Stars

The stars in the night Giving light like a sunlight Satisfy my heart I want to reach you Just to say something 'bout you You are beautiful Oh Looking at you Remembering all my days Hope he thinks me too I know you're not gone Come with me 'till the night come Show your smile again

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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 1/15/2017 4:06:00 PM

All poems of your I read lead me to the paintings you put forth and all the colors in which they provide such vived pictures I was drow into and the beauty of those pictures I thank you for the wonderful works and picture God's blessing lot of love and prayers to you always you are always in my heart and prayers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 5:47:00 PM

Elai, stopping by to say hi... enjoying you haiku again...Linda

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/30/2013 11:10:00 AM

A lovely star. Beautiful! AO

Elai Cee
Date: 6/1/2013 12:47:00 AM

thanks AO

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/27/2013 11:23:00 PM

Beautiful write! I enjoyed this very much. -edward

Elai Cee
Date: 5/29/2013 1:15:00 AM

thanks Edward!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/24/2013 8:56:00 AM

Love it...enter the kissing in the rain contest if you have not done so....

Elai Cee
Date: 5/24/2013 9:06:00 AM

well thank you for the recomendation JUdy

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/14/2013 10:21:00 PM

Ah, I love it. Very innocently beautiful! Great job, Elai :)

Elai Cee
Date: 5/14/2013 10:50:00 PM

Thanks Harrel God bless you!

Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 5/7/2013 6:04:00 AM

- A very very beautiful haiku Elai it reminds me of one night in my first meeting of my wife I thank you very much for wonderful return to a time I need to visit a little more with my better half {my lovely wife} God bless and keep you in His arms Love it.

Elai Cee
Date: 5/9/2013 11:00:00 AM

thank you so much ReV SAMUEL MACK OMS. I am really happy to know it. God bless you too!

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/6/2013 1:20:00 PM

Really beautiful haiku enjoyed. Loved always, bl

Elai Cee
Date: 5/26/2013 9:04:00 AM

thank you bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/6/2013 12:16:00 PM

- A beautiful haiku Elai - thank you! - Very well written. - Welcome to P-S oup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elai Cee
Date: 5/6/2013 12:45:00 PM

thanks anne lisse. im happy to see every comment u've shared to me!

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/6/2013 4:38:00 AM

I love the emotions here in this beautiful write my friend. I'm sure he isn't gone and he's smiling right above you...enjoyed reading..And it's a pleasure having you visit my work..Thank you..regards INK-U-SCRIPT

Elai Cee
Date: 5/6/2013 12:43:00 PM

yah thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 10:41:00 AM

Elai, a nice way of satisfaction through the eyes of millions of stars. 4 wonderful haiku. Lovely, and romantic, and a hint of longing. The first was the most enjoyable imagery, however i enjoyed the way you end it with the comfort of a needed smile... thanks for the kind hi... always~ Linda

Elai Cee
Date: 5/5/2013 10:48:00 AM

thanks Linda, it helps me a lot!