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The Stars

I can’t seem to find the words to properly express My love for nature at its best I think if I could describe one part My favorite would be the stars Like diamonds they sparkle and shine Lighting the way to heaven divine Only for one moment a cloud passes by You know they are there though they hide The moon it hangs in wait all through the night At dawn the sun brings us daylight Again the stars go away to hide You know they are waiting for the night A Universe of stars and planets too A miraculous and romantic view

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/5/2009 11:32:00 PM
hi there Lolita. I love the stars, they are truly captivating. I really like this poem. And thank you for commenting on my poem. More power to you. ~Love, Andy
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Date: 6/13/2008 8:42:00 AM
Yes, yes. The stars and the night will cure any ache. I was mesmerized by this, and will put it in my favorites. Much love, Ivy
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Date: 6/12/2008 8:32:00 AM
Excellent observations in this one. I to am a fan of the heavens and what they represent in our lives and those of the past. East evening until dust I search for the great Goddess in the sky and of course the God is above us during the day. Excellent. ~Peace~Gar
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Date: 6/12/2008 7:31:00 AM
Great piece Lolita. The stars in the sky are truly a magnificent creation, very calming and symbolizing endless possibilities. I enjoy this piece. ~Des Juan
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Date: 6/12/2008 7:30:00 AM
Great piece Lolita. The stars in the sky are truly a magnificent creation, very calming and symbolizing endless possibilities. I enjoy this piece. ~Des Juan
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Date: 6/11/2008 6:39:00 PM
What could give more to ponder than a sky silled with stars? It is one of my most favorite things to do...lay down and look into heaven...a beautiful poem. Blessings, Kristin XO
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Date: 6/11/2008 12:08:00 PM
Yes, a view that truly evokes romance at its best. Lovely imagery in this as you bring one perspective of the stars to life for the readers. Very well written couplet form. Awesome as always. Michael
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