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The house is asleep I'm left awake A rumble shakes the rafters loose I start to quake I push the curtain lace aside I crawl onto the window ledge and poke my head and look about A train is coming! Whizzing by !! Is this a scheme to steal my dreams? A train is speeding across the lawn Through pillow down, and through the mist I stretch my arm, with sleepy yawns Reach out my hand and I latch on A whistle blares, I feel the air that rushes by, drifts over me The engine steam, has taken me into a cloud and I can see a gondolier..., and heaping cars of gold, and stacks of shining stars The sleeper car has followed close I close my eyes, and I am prone We sail right up, into the stars It takes me where the sky is clear I hold onto a shooting star Far past the moon and planet Mars At speed of light, I have no fright The track leads through the pitch of night I travel on a the "Starlight Dream" The clock ticks on, the track is long Tomorrow's track will lead me back And I will wake at crack of dawn Back in my bed, where I belong _________________ 8/6/15 For Mystic Rose's Contest: "Trains and Fantasy"

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Date: 8/10/2015 11:48:00 PM
Congratulations, CARRIE.... SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2015 7:42:00 AM
I love fantasy. Great poem Carrie.
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Date: 8/10/2015 1:15:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Carrie! Great imagery!
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Date: 8/9/2015 1:12:00 PM
Wonderful write a 7 congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/9/2015 8:47:00 AM
Fantastic fantasy trip Carrie...a poetic visit to the mind of sleepy headed child looking out on a blue moon night.
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Date: 8/7/2015 1:41:00 AM
Wonderful Carrie! Fantasies.... great imagery,, Gl in contest!
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