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The Starkness of Love

Dulcimer dewdrops paint the leafy canvas, hungry mouthlings bobbing a rambunctious sway from clear pleasure of impact to receive blessings of the day, the celestials milk of lactate rain; Natural communion of God's living waters. Springtime of Life in the midsts of earthen daughters festival seasonings to give down sunny aisle. The Sun baptises the atmosphere into radiant bands to Godfather it along, graft in its song, to treat them well and cherish their innocent incense of Petra-Petrichoronation. Everything minted, freshly new, looks one to another in curious expressions, each starkness of moment a momento co-efficient a moonlit kiss, a rhyme to feel on the skin-under the enigmatic dance of time a type of salutation, a hand extended across the pews of cherished commune. Overseer-elemental- spirit-emissary- spreads over the horizon, an Angel of the mind's auburn snows and breaker of confinements of prose, has a general idea what C R E A T I O N must be feeling, but sneaks a look to every station, every interaction, each breath taken silence of magical gratitude the entrance into the white fluffy and delicate know. The lottery was won by each for no other reason that G O D is the Author and Master Poet, of Love and balls lightning to show it.

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Date: 3/6/2024 12:18:00 PM
Great use of metaphors and adjective here Jude.. Your poem vividly captures the essence of nature with phrases like "dulcimer dewdrops" and "leafy canvas," painting a picturesque scene that transports the reader into the beauty of the natural world... Through lines such as "Natural communion of God's living waters" and "The Sun baptises the atmosphere," the poem evokes a sense of spiritual connection and reverence for the divine presence in nature... You have a unique way with words..
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Jude Herrick
Date: 3/6/2024 12:55:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. It is heartfully beneficial to imagine the quiet glee from nothingness to each the other here, family, presto, joy's tears.

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