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The Star Was Falling

The Day I sat outside The stars twinkled Very bright The wind was calm The moon big and white That night I thought Was the end That night I fell asleep In the meadow Of my love This meadow that I lay in Was found by my heart I've come here for years I come there still I spent the night In this magical meadow To wake At the end of the next day And as I sit and gaze at the Stars I see a shooting star 'Oh shooting star, oh shooting star Grant me my one true wish I'm in need of a loved one I'm in need of a friend Let this be the day I find him ' And then it disappeared With a trail out behind it Out of nowhere There you were So lonely laying in the grass Now that I found you It will be easier For you For me So now we sit in this meadow Where three years ago we met We look up at the sky and see That the same star was passing by 'The star is falling' I replied You smile and say in the silence 'Yes, The star is falling'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/6/2011 12:08:00 PM
Great writing, sounds from the heart. Correct spelling would make your poetry flow much much better. Blessings, Dave.
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Date: 4/13/2010 4:49:00 PM
CrazyCookie's done it again. This is really a great poem.
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:13:00 AM
The star was falling The wish was thought behind, But where is,my sacred wish?Like it.
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Date: 2/1/2010 11:07:00 AM
I love this, fix your spelling and it would be soo much better <3 awesome job (: this is one of my favs
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