The Star

This beautiful angel is a star Twinkling above me, I think she is near the sky She radiates endless cheers and smiles My soul is whole, part of it the sound of a guitar I am whole, and my joy is infinite In love with her in, out, and all I think she carries the name of Lilies Perfect dance and she can make me instantly fall Love is a miracle and when it comes to her and me The whole universe is just tiny and small

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Skat A

Date: 11/29/2014 10:47:00 PM

this is perfect Jaffer,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Jaffer Safwan
Date: 11/30/2014 7:33:00 AM

Princess Skat I am from Saudi Arabia....studied in USA....in my free time...I write what I call "Poems" and "Short Stories"....Thank you my dear...wish u always along with the rest of our friends the best of everything...thanks

Ana Espinola Collins

Date: 11/26/2014 11:53:00 AM

A beautiful and romantic poem...nicely done Jaffer! :)

Jaffer Safwan
Date: 11/27/2014 6:41:00 AM

Thank you Ana.....You are very kind...warm...and generous.... hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2014 5:28:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Jaffer - I choose your first lovely and well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jaffer Safwan
Date: 11/25/2014 11:54:00 PM

Anne Thank you....so kind and sweet of you.....your words will enrich my heart....thanks again