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The Stairs To Your Bedroom

naked together you clothe me in the fabric of your desire all the while soothing my want your lips part and make a smile and i die. i die inside. i die inside and out time moves too quickly before i know it you leave all left is a covered memory barely fills the insatiable me until once again it's we

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Date: 12/9/2014 3:41:00 PM
I love this one. It's short and it does what you wanted it to do: capture that sinking feeling of not being with the one you love. I think it was very nice the way you changed the me to "we" in the final rhyme. Gotta fave it!!
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Date: 12/9/2014 3:39:00 PM
Maurice, I am slowly making my way to having viewed every single one of your poems. Now let me see this one. It looks intriguing.
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Date: 9/13/2014 11:41:00 AM
Warm, delightful, tender and loving. A joy to read Maurice, James :)
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Date: 8/29/2014 8:00:00 PM
A lovely write, Maurice.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/31/2014 10:13:00 PM
thank you so much for your support.
Date: 8/28/2014 4:40:00 PM
OH!!! This one is fabulous! I love this kind of write. Well done, Maurice...VERY well done!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:42:00 PM
that thrills me to no end thank you.
Date: 8/28/2014 5:41:00 AM
Enjoyed your passionate thoughts on love and romance, Maurice
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:37:00 PM
It always pleases me when you visit. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 8/27/2014 8:05:00 PM
Well done my friend....very passionate.... Tim
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:36:00 PM
thanks Tim.
Date: 8/27/2014 7:21:00 PM
a passionate write Maurice - no stairs to my bedroom I live in a bungalow LOL hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 1:39:00 PM
LOl you do make me smile Maurice:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:35:00 PM
that's a little queer, now I'm top of me.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:34:00 PM
I'm thinking of changing the title to "the hallway to your bedroom" wink wink say no more say no more...
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:31:00 PM
Date: 8/27/2014 6:30:00 PM
desire fulfilled what could be better? Maurice a pen of love hugs
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/29/2014 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. I think most of us gravitate towards the idea of eternal love.

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