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The Square Root of 784

For the first time in my life, I think I have fallen in love. Your happy outlook makes you so inviting. With you, I actually feel comfortable. Something about you makes it feel right. I can say I have never felt like this before. Here I am at the age of twenty-eight. I was beginning to believe there was no one for me. “Someone for everyone” seemed to be a lie. However, here you are with me. It wasn’t too late for me after all. Well, it looks as if we have made a connection. All the pieces of the puzzle fit together nicely. This time, you will not get away. I want you with me forever. Robert Pettit for Nette Onclaud’s “At This Age” contest

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Date: 1/16/2012 1:18:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/15/2012 9:26:00 AM
congrats on your big win, robert... see my "coming of age" blog when able..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON A GREAT WIN FOR THIS LOVING TRIBUTE TREASURE ..
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful poem here Robert and a creative title.Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/14/2012 12:27:00 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win, loved it,bl
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:20:00 PM
This is wonderful and I am glad to finally be seeing by going thru the winners' list. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:12:00 PM
Charming write, Robert! Congrats on the win. PS- sometimes people even fall in love in nursing homes, are married at 95. Love doesn't wear a watch or follow calendars. Glad to hear that it found you.
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Date: 1/6/2012 5:13:00 PM
Well done Robert 28 is not too old! A good write, Blessings, Brenda
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Date: 1/6/2012 4:27:00 PM
Robert - love this poem, with a rather intriguing title. So often, I find, that love sometimes has a way of finding people just when they have given up all hope of finding it. There must be something in the ending of the chase that results in people finally relaxing and finding the prize. Nice write - good luck in the contest. Joe
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Date: 1/6/2012 9:21:00 AM
Beautiful, simply beautiful! I love this free-verse! It flows very nicely and tells exactly what is needed! Love is a beautiful thing, we will always remember when we have it! Wonderful Work!!
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