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The Spirit of Universal Energy For Perfection

In and out of fleshy-boney body, the senses prevail faster of all in mind,in heart and in soul, "The Spirit of Universal energy" Going on and on, with ego's instinct being bound to be so as deserved predetermined for the sake of "THE ULTIMMOST" "THE UNIVERSE"is being played for its finest perfection, where "The Spirit of Universal energy" and ego clashes for new construction. Soul is caused, body is born and mind is evolved, Impartial heart speaks the truth of the Spirit showing the path to the ego. All in the tiny fleshy body, "a tiny universe" nothing is impossible to conquer the perfection in this Universe. Its game and nothing else.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/30/2017 8:35:00 PM

I wanted to visit your first poem here to see how the magic began :-) This is so You :-) Your words are of acceptance and love for all. To respect Nature, The Spirit and allow positive energy to flow through one's heart enveloping the Soul in divine Peace. Breathtaking writing :-) One of your longer poems, you have become a master at the Haiku and Senyru today. It's always a pleasure to read your lovely words. blessings xxx

Bl Devnath
Date: 11/28/2018 2:24:00 AM

At the first i say sorry for giving reply and to give thanks to you lately. Am giving you my heartiest thanks for leaving these wonderful heartfelt words of appreciation to me. Loved always, bl

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/3/2012 10:30:00 AM

Sweet message, bl! Jimbo

Bl Devnath
Date: 9/4/2012 8:37:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your sweet comment. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/28/2011 10:28:00 AM

Love to read the poets first poem posted on soup, i'm not disappointed Bl, this is an exceptional piece. harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/23/2011 2:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week BL. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/23/2011 3:31:00 PM

Thanks for giving congratulation. God bless us all. bl

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/21/2011 11:32:00 PM

congrats bl on your featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful to share with luv..

Bl Devnath
Date: 8/22/2011 12:37:00 AM

You are Welcome. Good day. bl

Chhutan Dey

Date: 5/27/2011 10:21:00 PM

loved so much..."All in the tiny fleshy body"....the essence of the poem.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/28/2011 12:05:00 AM

I have tried my best to extract my feelings in writing this prose-poetry.Thanks a lot for commenting. Good day Mr.Chhutan Dey,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 7:25:00 AM

Very lovely expressions well penned on universal energy for perfection, devnath

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/25/2011 9:40:00 PM

Thanks a lot for commenting my prose poetry. I m new born and trying to write my own feelings. Certainly there will be mistake, no doubt. Show me the path, so that I can be able to express my feelings in proper way. I pray to God for your sound health from all spheres in life. bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/24/2011 5:16:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you BL. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/25/2011 9:49:00 PM

Giving first thanks to you for earliest comment. Thanks again for showing me a way to read and comment on others' poetry. I am new born to write poetry in English. Generally, I write in Bangla, one of the Indian languages. For your well wishing, I am being inspired a lot. I too pray to God for your sound health from all spheres of life. bl