The Spirit Of

The spirit of I wonder about the spirit of a moment ? Is it avoided because of nurturing lent ? Life is but a journey so very short ! It’s moments – why do so many abort ? From every moment, one should suck the life out of, reaching out for, touching that spirit above all that has kept one from life’s pleasures, never to know the joys of - all of life’s treasures. B. J. “A” 2 August 1st 2013

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/1/2013 11:34:00 AM

yes interesting write I enjoyed your poetry! Laura :)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 8/1/2013 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Laura Mckenzie, for your thoughtful comments. I am pleased that you find my stuff interesting and more so that you find enjoyment from reading it. Considering, I have been contemplating no longer submitting my stuff, from the past or creating anything new, but your connection has given me cause to rethink my position in this matter and take the time to bring forward the past and bring the present to life . Thank you again Laura . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )