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The Spiral of Design

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sacred life… mortal as a seashell cradled and designed by divine hands swept by tides over the waves of chance phosphorescence under tender skies hidden souls within a spiral core with lore of an ocean at thy breast soft landings upon the shoals of time 'till nestled in the palm of God’s hand ~~~~~~~~~~

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/28/2016 9:37:00 PM

Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win. I'm so behind here, the SEA theme is perfect. Love LINDA -

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/20/2016 12:29:00 AM

Oh Carrie...this is first place for me! Congratulations on your win with this creative masterpiece! #7 fave!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 1/19/2016 6:06:00 AM

Very beautiful imagery and verses, Carrie! ;-) Congrats on your placement in the contest!

Skat A

Date: 1/18/2016 11:21:00 PM

CARRIE, Congratulations on your Fine Sea win... Stop by my latest blog "This is HOW I FEEL" if you'd like. LOVE SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/18/2016 10:57:00 PM

Very wonderful write Carrie.. loved reading this morning.. congrats on big win!

Kash Poet

Date: 3/9/2012 11:10:00 AM

I loved it first time around Carrie.Congrats on your win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2012 7:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2012 4:31:00 AM

Great idea for your work..Winners' circle quality..Congrats on your win..Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/9/2012 2:49:00 AM

Beautiful spirituality. Congratulations on your big win. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2012 11:13:00 PM

this was beautiful and I'm glad to be seeing it now. Congratulations to you, Carrie.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2012 9:09:00 PM

just lovely and well woven , carrie.. congrats on your win in my contest! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/8/2012 7:47:00 PM

Carrie...this is another well-planned write...I enjoyed how you intertwined nature and God...goosebumps really...Congrats..that last line...it gave me goosebumps..Gwendolen

Christopher Bunton

Date: 3/8/2012 7:35:00 PM

Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2012 7:11:00 PM

congrats Carrie on a superb win for this brilliant beauty write on seashells ..lovely..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/1/2012 10:57:00 AM

This sure is a very beautiful take on nette's challenge, Carrie :D -- as I read this, I can't help but imagine this and agree to what you say-- I can't recall but I think that there is such a beautiful mathematical aspect to a nautilus shell, definitely one of God's beautiful creations :D Enjoyed this one!