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At the Speed of Life

I sat down and watched mans great consuming need He moved quickly towards the nothing For nothing could satisfy him those things he had grasped for became dust within his hands I wondered within my silence Who he had been before he too turned to dust My choice was not to forget him for amongst his moments there were pearls Those smiles and kisses he failed to collect I listened to the music he was unable to hear Inhaled the fragrance of the beauty he had relinquished Bathed myself in the light of magnificent sunsets There in my stationary position I moved at the speed of life Within his experiences I felt the loss of his possibilities causing a single tear to drip down my face It grew, forming into a lake Upon the lake I floated with my thoughts until I panicked For I thought I would drown sink beneath my own questioning Where would I travel next now that man had disappeared A hand reached for me from above the surface of the water so I grasped for more Holding onto my great need I felt God lift me until I gazed upon His face He smiled at me and my brothers For despite our flaws We had not been forsaken!

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Date: 5/3/2016 12:38:00 PM
what an uplifting verse with eloquent lines, rich... yes, we are never forsaken!... huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2016 3:16:00 PM
Hugs back Nette, thanks for visiting.
Date: 5/2/2016 4:36:00 PM
Richard, this is excellent and so beautifully penned, I am loving this 7 ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 10:08:00 PM
Thanks Constance!;0)
Date: 5/2/2016 3:05:00 PM
Reminds me of the movie with Carry Grant, "People Will Talk" one of my favorites. Dr. Noah Praetorius is standing over a cadaver telling his students about all the things that the deceased was in life & that they would NEVER find with years of dissection! Love the metaphor to salvation here. Otherwise life will set one into existential depression. Wonderfully done!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 10:09:00 PM
Thanks for the great comment Edlynn.
Date: 5/2/2016 7:49:00 AM
God always lift us but we have to learn ourselves not to fall! Inspiring writing with a very stern warning, my friend, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Demetrios.
Date: 5/2/2016 2:52:00 AM
How lovely. You really make the reader think about the meaning of life. Your talent amazes me....loved the line in which you incorporated your title. Great job
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 5/1/2016 9:00:00 PM
Profound and powerful. this is amazing, Richard. Gotta fave it!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks for faving it Andrea.
Date: 5/1/2016 10:06:00 AM
Deep very well written poem Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2016 7:16:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 4/30/2016 11:27:00 PM
At a loss for words, as you have used them all here, and very well! :) The title goes so well with this poem! :) A7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2016 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, sorry for using up so many words. ;0)
Date: 4/30/2016 7:36:00 PM
Wow Richard, this is an impressive work! What great lines such as: "There in my stationary position I moved at the speed of life". I really loved this work of art! #7 ; )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2016 7:50:00 AM
You are kind Connie, thanks for visiting.
Date: 4/30/2016 3:47:00 PM
Brings a smile to the soul Richard, enjoyed this very much. Kind regards, Craig
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 6:20:00 PM
Thanks Craig. ;0)
Date: 4/30/2016 12:35:00 PM
Very nicely written very profound, I always enjoy your work, it is always well put together, subtle spirituality, filling the void most humans feel without understanding their place in God's purpose.A7
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks John.
Date: 4/30/2016 10:48:00 AM
Richard, thanks for the uplifting read and thoughts. I mean I was not expecting the end to be a feeling, I've closed my eyes too... Love LINDA
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/30/2016 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I'm glad you were surprised.

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