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The Specks

7/16/12 ------------------------------------------------------ A single life dangles on a string tied to billions Can not one notice that speck within the crowd? Is it even worthy of acknowledgement? Every speck represents the whole being The body—without that speck it isn’t worth seeing I write for the sake of the ignored I write because I am abhorred Ever does the wind blow As the blackened specks began to grow The disease is spreading in the mass And suddenly all attention is on that dangling speck They watch as it falls out of their realm But the sickness is still there among them They watch the speck fall You blame one—you blame them all

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2012 6:22:00 PM
I also like the depth of your subject matter. This is not ordinary stuff. It is thought provoking. This could be interpreted on many levels. I believe you are showing how you feel about the way individuals are part of society and if one is hurt--it hurts all. That is good thinking (if I got it right)
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 8/16/2012 6:27:00 PM
That is definably one way to interpret it. Thank you for your gracious and insightful comment. :) ~Laura

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