Get Your Premium Membership

The Sour Deceiver

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Sara Kendrick.


Image result for pictures of a man caught cheating on his wife

A mother with a baby boy Another child now on its way A husband who pledged love~a ploy Slips with the adulteress away Adulteress' husband comes home; their dismay Caught, well, almost; that playboy Slithered out the window unclothed No way to escape; life will destroy Trapped naked outside unabashed Lied, lied his friend's reputation trashed Written: June 25, 2016 Contest: Sweet Little Lies Sponsor: Silent One The husband went to the house next door/ Got the person there to call his friend to come get him..His friend took him(the husband) to the husband's mother's house..The mother went to her son's house to get him more clothes. The husband told his wife that his friend was caught with another woman and he(the husband) had to rescue him by bringing to his mother's house and get him clothes..Yeah!! Right!! Who believes that one???

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/10/2016 3:59:00 PM
sadly this sort of thing happens - great for the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 6/25/2016 4:20:00 PM
Oh the folly of mankind at times Sara, hope this well written piece does well in the contest.'
Login to Reply
Kendrick Avatar
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/25/2016 5:11:00 PM
Yes, follies for sure but it was wrong on both parties part and doubly wrong on the man's part with a wife at home with young children..As Dr. Phil would say what in the world is wrong with you man??? Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Date: 6/25/2016 3:59:00 PM
oh what a sad state of 'affairs' great take on the contest - good luck:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Kendrick Avatar
Sara Kendrick
Date: 6/25/2016 4:08:00 PM
Thanks for the nice comment..Sin will take a person down the wrong road that leads to their destruction..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Book: Reflection on the Important Things