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The Souper Star

Where can I go. Following me like the black plague, Droppings here and there for show. ----let them lie where they fall after all who is the big cheese who is the termite at the top of the hill, rambling longer, saying less, worthless krill having to search out a dying whale simply to have meaning to it’s existence. Excess baggage intended solely to take up space. Tainting the atmosphere with worthless mindless waste. Floating around with an atmosphere of “too close for comfort.” Sad isn’t it. All the lies. All the make believe All the deception of fellow members who take the truth for granted. Like the willow, which can only bend so far, drivel faithfully ranted, comes to a bitter end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/11/2014 9:32:00 AM
Charles - I just may be reading between the soup lines. If so, brilliant, if not, brilliant. love, Kathy
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Charles Henderson
Date: 2/11/2014 9:33:00 PM
Well, this person does know enough to make a completely new registration for pseudo names. That way the poems all have a property id relative to that account. But everyone knows the real identity anywayso it is sort of childish. If you are really interested, soup me.
Date: 1/24/2014 9:34:00 PM
my captcha was 666something. haha
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Date: 1/24/2014 9:33:00 PM
yes, this is a YIKES!!! Strong words, Charles, it packs a whallop. (how the heck is that spelled. the computer is underlining it.)
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:13:00 PM
I agree with Flo....It is a very good piece in that it is expressive of your feelings on being misunderstood....poetic ability questioned....and on and on....Glad to have read this. Sad about the reality that exists.
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