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The Sounds of a Storm

Thunder booms - It is my heart beating The rain falls - It is my tears falling Lightening flashes - It is the way my eyes glow Wind blows - It is my heavy breaths... Flowers grow - Inside my chest Sunlight shines - Through my ribs and grows Animals wake - And so beautifully start singing Ice melts - You must be cheating Because my heart has never beat this loud, My tears have never came so happily out, My eyes have never taken on this glow, My breathing has never been so heavy; so fast and slow, My chest has never felt alive, That thing behind my ribs never knew it could survive, My soul has never sang such a beautiful song, So you must be cheating; how did you make me fall? For you my soul sings so sweet, the words and sound have a pleasent ring, For you, you brought my heart alive, now I dont fear that it will die, For you a garden of flowers grow, within my heart, its somewhere only you can go, For you, you make me forget how to breath, one moment its heated, the next im dreaming, For you make my eyes glow, they take on a shine, a look that no one else knows, For you, you are the one who can make me cry, but my lovely darling, you also make me smile, For you make my heart beat wild, so loud it could be thunder heard for a mile, Some moments it scares me, or makes me confused, but one thing saves me, I know I love you, Something tells me, we were meant to be, only time can tell, so I guess we'll have to see, But if the angels, are listening to my prayers, I hope they let us stay together, I hope forever Im yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 5:24:00 PM
this is a very strong poem i like it very much you
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Date: 6/5/2010 5:15:00 PM
Congrats this poem has made it to the HOT POEMS list .. go take a look on your left side of member page.. now many will read your work... keep up the great writing.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/2/2010 9:34:00 AM
Oh wow, Rain[Bow]--you sure grabbed my heart with this one--I was on the look out for any rainy writes (haha I have such a fascination for rain!) & I stumbled on this gem--I sure was smiling with this all the way through--it's so heartfelt! going to my faves! --nikko
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Date: 6/2/2010 7:34:00 AM
A very interesting write to read. Enjoyed your words
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:21:00 AM
Such a passionate write..I like the way your feelings blend with the nature. Beautiful! kisses, Emily
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Date: 6/1/2010 5:28:00 AM
I feel every line as it sways through emotions heavy with the burdens and joys of love... very similar in style to a friend of mine from a far-away Island....we all experience yearning and fulfillment in life...with hopes that the scale weighs in our favor...may it always be heavy with happiness for you, my friend Rain! I will read more of your art when I get home! (so I faved u!) jimbo
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Date: 5/29/2010 1:05:00 PM
Very direct and clear feelings mingled with your words. very well penned. make sure the one you wrote these words for will be touched.
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Date: 5/29/2010 12:51:00 PM
Nice emotion on the words, strong and painful, have a nice one, a friend,..p.d.
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:05:00 PM
Very unique in style, deeply moved by your romantic verse. Appreciate your kind comments to my poem. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:36:00 PM
"For you make my heart beat wild, so loud it could be thunder heard for a mile" Love this poem. Is a true beauty.
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Date: 5/28/2010 6:09:00 PM
It's a happy as well as sad mixture of emotions and sentiment of passion and yearning for love. It's really creative piece.
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Date: 5/28/2010 12:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Rain. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:41:00 AM
i loved it was was so beuatiful and touching i really enjoyed reading it :)
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:38:00 AM
wonderful write...very descriptive and filled with want and wonder..nicely done Rain..TAH
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:09:00 AM
I will add you 2 my favorite poet and poems as well
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:07:00 AM
I truly admire your emotion of words it was deeply felt...thank you. Greatness is that, that can be felt once seen, touched, and known.
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:59:00 AM
So beautiful..Charma
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