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The Sound of Steam

It’s cold outside, but from a dream I wake up to the sound of steam. The room is toasty, opportune For staying in my snug cocoon. The gentle hiss as background noise My half-asleep self quite enjoys, A remnant of when I was small, My brothers sleeping down the hall. To make the coming day seem rosy, There is nothing near as cozy As that warming welcome hiss, Deceiving us that naught’s amiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/24/2014 1:23:00 PM
Now that's a steamy write. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:10:00 PM
ha! thank you, robert! guess you're as short on time as i am lately - this is a rare unrhymed comment from you!
Date: 11/23/2014 7:49:00 PM
Memories ahhh, precursor of a beautiful day! I enjoyed the journey into your past in this well written piece Ilene!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:10:00 PM
thanks for your sweet comment, connie! it means a lot...
Date: 11/23/2014 6:05:00 PM
Ilene: I love this interlude into the world of steam, dreams and memories - all very well interwoven by your creative touch:) Also, thank you for the earlier visit. It's always a pleasure to hear from you. Warm hugs, Terry
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:09:00 PM
it's an equal pleasure to hear from you, terry! i'm very appreciative - sorry it's taken me so long to reply. i'm a bit pressed for time these days...
Date: 11/23/2014 12:19:00 PM
A delightful little poem...well done! :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 11/29/2014 2:08:00 PM
thank you very much, john! i appreciate the comment...

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