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The Sound of Love

Lying in the cold sterile room Tentatively tracing a soft pattern on the chair. My husband’s ashen face Staring blankly at the bleached white walls. Calming myself with each breath Waiting patiently for the news. She slowly enters with a kind smile Immediately I feel my anxiety weaken. She looks at the intimidating screen Suddenly the frantic sound fills the room The sound I will never forget, but long to hear again The sound of a thrashing propeller somehow submerged in water. The screen becomes a transparent window For the first time we gawk at our child. How I have prayed and imagined seeing him. How I have worried for everything to be alright. We entered with unspoken concerns Leaving with joyous hearts Proof of our little child Growing healthy with the strong sound of love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/29/2013 4:07:00 PM
Carlos, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/27/2013 10:59:00 PM
Excellent imagery here!!!! Beautiful poem..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 6/26/2013 11:07:00 PM
Carol, enjoyed... brilliant -Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda"
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