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MEME BY MY DEAR FRIEND Mel

The soft sounds of my hands in the air Swift swooshing movement of words Expressive fingers moving letters around Stillness flowing sentences to paper The intricate familiar patterns of language Never perceived as impossible until Possibilities run out, until words stop making sense inside. Until lips tongue and brain fail to co-operate, then mouth becomes meaningless, messy The soft sound of my hands in the air Swift swooshing movement of words Of colours painted by writing hands Hands gesture music in the air, frail and gentle, and ever so expressive Drooping words of rain and raising words of rainbow, of love and warmth Twinkling words of night and dark music It all paints pictures in a book where It doesn't matter my mouth didn't speak.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2017 12:29:00 AM
of course. Use sign language when coherent speech is not possible. Why didn't my parents think of that? At least we could have communicated and I would have felt loved instead of flawed.
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Darren White
Date: 5/21/2017 1:07:00 AM
Exactly Paul, exactly.... It would have ended the isolation.
Date: 9/6/2016 9:48:00 AM
This is a tremendous piece Darren...a 7 and fav...It has a great flow and meaning
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Darren White
Date: 9/6/2016 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Tim, it means a lot to me! Honestly.

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