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The Soul I Sold

The Soul I Sold In the dream I dreamed last night. The world was dark and cold. I had returned back into hell. To retrieve the soul I sold. Surrounded by my enemies. Not one friend did I see. I tried to save another. The way that He saved me. As I looked all around me. I heard the souls that cried. My enemy stayed hidden. From the light I had inside. Finally I found my soul. It was lost and all alone. I laid hold upon it. And I claimed it as my own. Throughout my journey into hell. I was constantly under attack. They could no longer hurt me. And I did not fight back. I found another lying there. Her heart was broke in two. I reached out to hold her. And I carried her out too. Edwin C Hofert

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 3:28:00 PM
Very well thought out poem. A champion in the underworld. God Bless. D. I'm off to my bed now but I have red flagged you and will red some more soon. You have a fan! The validation code for this is 4am. I wrote one called 2-45 in the morning. D.
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Date: 3/26/2015 11:27:00 AM
Intro is amazing...very well written poem keep it up all the readers found their soul in your poem...God bless you..
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Date: 3/17/2015 9:25:00 PM
That is a very creative, deep, beautiful poem!
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