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The Soldier's Little Girl

The soldier watched his baby girl as he whispered in her ear, he pointed at her heart and said "I will always be right here." A single tear ran down her cheek and she mumbled, "Daddy please don't go." He put her down and told her "Never forget I will always love you so," He kissed his wife and quietly walked out as his wife held their daughter in order for her not to shout. For families who have member fighting over seas, remember they are fighting for you freedom so try to sleep at ease. Remember that they love you and keep hopeful from their strength, they will also think of you and go the extra length.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/31/2011 5:05:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Elisabeth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/29/2011 4:31:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your touching poetry tonight.. my youngest son is in military in Libya right now.. enjoy the site as u continue to share words with luv..
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Date: 5/29/2011 3:23:00 PM
Lovely thoughts on the little girl quite touchy and moving, Elisabeth
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Date: 5/29/2011 12:48:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. enjoy the site as u continue to share with luv.. our contests are free ..check them out and good luck.luv..
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Date: 5/29/2011 11:53:00 AM
Elisabeth, I'm sad with your poem. I try to keep the light on my face.. my brother never returned from over seas' sadly tags and a flag did... thank you for this poem... and I keep what they fight for in mind... take care,... p.d.
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