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The Snowmum

There was a little boy, and Maxwell was his name His face shone when he saw the snow, he asked to play a game His mummy wrapped him warmly and tucked him in lovingly Come on Max let’s go outside and you can play with me. They built a snowman from the snow, he was tall and round and fat They put buttons for his eyes and they even found a hat. They stayed all day to Max’s delight, but all to soon it was then night Max and mum went inside; he blew a kiss, what a lovely sight The morning came the snow had gone poor Max was devastated He ran outside and looked everywhere, but his fears were not abated He searched the garden and the garage and under each and every bush But all that was left of the snowman was a great big pile of slush. His mother could not bear poor Max so sad and she didn’t know what to say She did something she had not tried before; she got on her knees to pray She raised her eyes heavenward, arms held in supplication This is what I want of you, this is my dedication. I want him to have a snowman each and every day; I want him to be happy I might even go to church, if you can make it snappy The morning came and to his delight a snowman was just there Max ran to his mummy, but couldn’t find her anywhere. He ran into the yard to see the snowman standing It had a familiar face-just like the picture on the landing. God had answered his mummy’s prayer, but he was not one to be mocked He had turned Max’s mum to snow and now she was quite shocked. So remember what you pray for, and just do it carefully What happened to Max’s mum could happen to you or me. © #GG~ reposted to celebrate the fact we are snowed in .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/19/2013 5:21:00 AM
another intriging and very clever poem from you Girl,, reminds me of Midas touch,,,read this a couple of times,,came across as a excellent everyday poem,,,but reading it again,, i should have known,, you do not write an everyday kind of poem...
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:50:00 PM
I tried not to laugh, but one, okay two or three escaped. One thing I know I'll be very careful of what I pray for. Provokes thoughts, and a tiny chuckle. Warm Smiles Always, Connie
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Date: 1/19/2013 3:04:00 AM
Thanks Connie, glad you had a little dark chuckle there xx
Date: 1/18/2013 2:44:00 PM
Does it say more about me than the poem if I say I found it really funny? Maybe I've got a dark sense of humour. Enjoy the snow. I'm off for a hot chocolate and a blanket!
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Date: 1/19/2013 3:03:00 AM
ha glad you did I wanted it to be funny in a dark way, I get fed up of new mum's wanting every possible thing for their child, it was a bit of a dig. Mums have to learn to say no sometimes xx
Date: 1/18/2013 10:59:00 AM
Positively facinated by this write... Have you been reading POE lately... LOL
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:15:00 AM
No must try him lol thanks xx
Date: 1/18/2013 9:09:00 AM
Mandy this is scary, now I know why I have always hated the snow lol.....David
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:16:00 AM
I have more reasons than this David brrr we are snowed in xx
Date: 1/18/2013 8:17:00 AM
great story! i enjoyed it. i hardly remember what it's like to be snowed it - we've been having fairly mild winters in new york (not that i miss the snow!).
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:17:00 AM
No nobody can miss the snow ilene , it's freezing and I have a big drift over my car lol xx
Date: 1/18/2013 4:52:00 AM
hey that's fab Mandy your such a good writer of poetry.....Seren
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Date: 1/18/2013 11:17:00 AM
Ha you don't do bad yourself love xx

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