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~The Snowman~ (Abecedarian) As the kids go out Braving the snow that Continually falls all thru the Day, they start to play and laugh Excitedly run to the shining snow that Falls and covers their pink noses, to the Ground below they run and roll Happily, as they giggle and chortle Inside mom watches each, with a happy grin Joyfully she laughs and calls them all, as they Keep on playing and throwing snow balls, as they Land everywhere it gets whiter with more fallen-snow then Mom comes running out of the house, and Nears quickly the children, that are happily laughing Overjoyed, with all the excitement they're having as they Play and beg mom to join them in all the fun Quietly they kneel upon the ground and Rest, grabbing mounds of the shining snow as they Start to build a huge Snowman, as Tall and strong as it can it be, then they Unite together to finish it quickly. Very soon it will get dark and they Want to drink a hot cup of coco X-cellent way to beat the winter- blues that Year after year, with all the snow shows Zero-like temperatures on the go. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2009 January.07.2016

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Date: 1/7/2016 3:11:00 PM
Hey, I really enjoyed reading this one. you did quite well with the form. It flowed smoothly.
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:10:00 AM
nice one there
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