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The Smoking Room

Mutters in the corner, Halfheard mumblings of conversations, Uninteresting lives. Dull. Smoke from tabs mixing with Cold breath, dancing their escape. Staring. Dreaming. Slate grey walls holding up a shanty roof. Rain falls, pitter pat Random thoughts. Huddle together - apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2009 11:57:00 PM
Awesome and inspiring poem. Congratulations for being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/15/2009 1:41:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:52:00 AM
Congrats on your awesome piece being featured this week, you are such an inspired poet. Keep your pen writing. great you! asq, Adeleke
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Date: 6/15/2009 6:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Malcolm. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2009 5:32:00 AM
Thank you James, Vince, diane for your wonderful comments. I feel chuffed to be featured for the first time. Thanks again.
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Date: 6/15/2009 5:08:00 AM
Malcolm,..great poetry ! congrats on its feature this week ! james
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Date: 6/15/2009 4:56:00 AM
Congras on "The Smoking Room" being featured, Malcolm. Vince
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Date: 6/15/2009 2:48:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, wonderful work, God bless you from diane
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