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The Smoking Girl

That young girl Is Fair skin And tall waist Is howling shaking On the terrace after the rain Smoking fiercely Her glamorous body is trembling and Beautiful eyes are filled with hatred and confusion Being narcosis In the hazy smoke Getting lost In the lonely sorrow She Is coldly watching passers Disdains revealing suffers A rebellious drama On the way to nowhere Vigorously being staged The main character of the drama Is sucking the poison to murder her own In the coldness of the rain Trying to jump out from the misery But deeply immersing in the abyss of ignorance By Yunyan GU 03 Jan. 2016

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Date: 1/17/2016 4:01:00 AM
Good work, Yunyan. Kindly take note of those tiny errors of syntax.
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Yunyan Gu
Date: 1/19/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thanks for the advice, I will.English is my third Language...cheers.

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