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The Smile In My Mind

Gal I wrote your name inside my heart It sounds every letter when each beat starts There’s no need for me to call out your name You can tell from my eyes this heart won’t change You’re the smile in my mind The whisper in my ears The colour in my soul And the love in my tears I’ll never change this happiness I found My blood flows thick like an emotional cloud Because there’s a beautiful song in my heart It’s been playing these strings right from the start You’re the smile in my mind The whisper in my ears The colour in my soul And the love in my tears It’s a magical tune of sweet bitter love Keeps playing and playing as the sun shines above This bond between us will never be broken As this space in my heart has been overtaken Today my heart glowed a thousand lights Pumped love around brighter than bright My soul whispered you know I love you My eyes full of smiles as I dreamed of you You’re the smile in my mind The whisper in my ears The colour in my soul And the love in my tears And I can’t control this brewing storm This fires burning from beyond the dawn With passion it melts all my tension away And I find new strength for a brand new day You’re the smile in my mind The whisper in my ears The colour in my soul And the love in my tears Fictional © Copyright KC.Leake 23rd September 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/3/2015 7:50:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, the 'chorus' extremely well written. Do you write music or play an instrument? This would truly be such a pretty and catchy song. I believe your noteworthy talent has just begun and will only get better and better with time. (I'm guessing you are on the 'young' side of life which makes your writes all the more impressive) ... CayCay
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/3/2015 12:47:00 PM
Thank you Caycay, For the read and lovely comment. I'm glad you enjoyed this!!! I just love writting about all sorts of things in life!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 10/1/2015 10:34:00 PM
This lyric flows so nicely, and I would love to hear the tune that goes with the words! You are a natural at lyrics, and I love the romance of this one, too! Great job, a 7!
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Kevin Leake
Date: 10/2/2015 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Laura, I appreciate your lovely comment!! Thanks for the read!! God Bless Kevin
Date: 9/28/2015 3:52:00 AM
No better feeling Kevin...lovely song
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/28/2015 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Tim, Glad you enjoyed it Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 9/26/2015 4:27:00 PM
A beautiful love song kev.
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/27/2015 1:38:00 AM
Thanks Charma, Really glad you liked it God Bless Kevin
Date: 9/26/2015 2:58:00 PM
superb romantic lyric Kevin love the impact of the repeated stanza:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Kevin Leake
Date: 9/27/2015 1:37:00 AM
Thanks Jan, Glad you enjoyed it God Bless Kevin

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