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The Sky Is Dark

The sky is dark for the sun is gone, But still my struggles are never done, Left here in the dark, feeling blindly, Groping for those who left me helplessly. When I am up high, they drag me down, Just as I thought they'd never let me drown, When I give them my trust in full value, I end up picking shattered pieces of a friendship I thought true. Why would they leave me in my most needed hour? Why should they leave when in fear I do cower? Why would they leave me when I needed them so? How could they bear to leave when I was fighting my foe?

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Date: 8/18/2016 3:13:00 PM
Beautifully penned but this is a deep sad rhyme Franchesca. Welcome to poetry soup:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2016 7:05:00 PM
Franchesca, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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