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Oh! Sky the lonely heart
Dwelling upon my untiring soul
Lost with an unspoken word.
Fountain of misery teaches him
That defiant endurance…
Oh! Sky the lonely soul
The creatures fly and obey
But the hollowness prevails.
The Sun burns him with anguish
Yet he weeps with pride.
Oh! Sky my undeniable hero
You made me the undefeated queen,
But I remained lost in my thoughts of isolation!
Now I wish to merge in you
Come my hero …my sky!

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  1. Date: 1/4/2012 9:57:00 AM
    It's beautiful !! Best of luck !!!

  1. Date: 1/4/2012 5:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Red. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/21/2011 8:07:00 AM
    love to go to one's first poem on soup, i'm sure not disappointed, awesome. harry

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 4:42:00 PM
    Wow this is an excellent poem. Can't wait to read the others. Oh! Welcome to the soup :-)

  1. Date: 5/22/2011 1:31:00 PM
    wow, it is so wonderful and amazing....just like you,,,,keep it up friend...

  1. Date: 5/21/2011 5:22:00 PM
    You're flying high with this one , Smriti. I see you too have a love affair with words. Enjoyed your poem. Thanks you for your comment on Nefarious romance

  1. Date: 5/3/2011 6:29:00 PM
    This is different, Nice read. Vince

  1. Date: 5/2/2011 9:33:00 AM
    wonderful write...

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 12:12:00 PM
    "The Sky" Most mntresting write. Me like.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 12:59:00 PM
    Really enjoyed this poem.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Smriti. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/25/2011 6:54:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Smriti

  1. Date: 4/24/2011 4:37:00 AM
    Welcome to the SOUP. Happy Easter. ~JSLambert

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 2:30:00 PM
    I like it. Most unusual. Thank You

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 4:57:00 PM
    Very good. The sky can have so many effects. Right now, it's been storming so the sky is very brutal. I enjoyed this poem as well. R.M.

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 5:16:00 PM
    Smiriti, profound poem . really like the line,'But I remined lost in my thoughts of isolation'. good one. great to see you here. Anne

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 3:59:00 PM
    i like it but i always thought the sky was an upraising thing and im only 10 so my poems may not be as sophisticated at they should be

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 3:01:00 PM
    You have penned a lovely and beautiful personification of the sky bringing out its attributes with different expressions. Yes, Smriti you have the flair for writing and this is the right place for you. Good luck in your endeavor,

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 1:41:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup-you love the sky too? Many of the poets on this site will enjoy your poetry that reflects on nature. I especially like your line regarding the creatures flying and obeying-excellent. Again, welcome! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 10:31:00 AM
    Very nice work, Smriti. I love the sky -- it makes me feel part of the universe. For me, it actually alleviates the loneliness. Staying inside alone is the worst place to be. Welcome to poetry soup! Best wishes, Carolyn